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God's Sunset - A haiku

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A swift breeze from South
I look into the sunset
His warmth glows in me
Praise da Lord
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This is very spiritual and touching in a way and it greatly appeals to me. It's such a fine example of what a haiku should be and I like the connection between God and the sun. The imagery that you use is really inspiring :)